<p>Hi, I'm Phill. If anyone here is bored or willing to lend a helping hand, do you think you'd be able to review an admissions essay I'm writing? </p>
<p>I'm transferring from a CC and hoping to get into one of my state schools (one of which is my dream school). I'd love to be a dentist one day, just to let you know a little more about myself.</p>
<p>Just let me know if you might have the time (and patience) to review it over the next few weeks. I'll send you a message with the document attached. As an extra incentive, I'll throw in a funny video as a reward. =)</p>
<p>Thanks in advance. I really appreciate the help!</p>