<p>Application deadlines are quickly approaching and I'm looking for someone to give me a few pointers on my essay. Any help/comments would be extremely appreciated. It's not your typical college autobiography essay, just my point of view on something and a quick, funny story from my life. Thanks in advance for anyone willing to help me out.</p>
<p>Bump, anyone willing to help out? (Just need you to not be applying this year)</p>
<p>yes i love to help but i dont understand what you mean in the ()
If you mean that I am not applying to college this year then I am sorry. Otherwise you can PM me :)</p>
<p>Hi Ryan, yes I’m sorry. I would rather have someone who’s in college or who has already graduated read it. Thank you for the kind offer.</p>
<p>Sure, just PM me.</p>
<p>me .</p>
<p>i’m down =)</p>
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also indicate what colleges you’re applying to with the essay so i can tailor my criticism</p>