Looking For Someone to Look Over My Essay

Hi all, I just wanted to get some feedback on my common app essay before I do a final edit. If anyone is willing please let me know and I will send a copy. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

@Pablobunny I’ll look over your essay if you need another pair of eyes

That be great thanks. Pm’d

Bump. Id like to see if I can get multiple viewpoints to make sure I dont overlook anything. Thanks

I can look over your essay

Thanks! Pm’d

I need the same but I am scared

I can read over it if you need another perspective!

@cable007 Thanks! pm’d

If there’s anyone with some good grammar knowledge Id greatly appreciate a quick pass over as I just amended a couple paragraphs and am unsure about a couple of commas. Thanks

I’ll give a look

@Jcannon1023 thanks so much! pm’d

I can help you if you’d like.

@USAStudent06 Thanks I appreciate, however I have submitted. Thanks to everyone on here as well; all of your advice was great