<p>its really embarrassing to ask someone to review my essay particularly because i have never been a good writer in my life, but i am kind of in an urgency here. any type of comment & advice will be much appreciated. please let me know if you are able to help me out & i'll pm you my essay. THANK YOU SO MUCH.</p>
<p>send it over and i will take a look at it!</p>
<p>id read it :)</p>