<pre><code> I am a rising high school senior a Vanderbilt hopeful. I just received my June SAT scores (2220, CR-760, M-690, W-770) and I plan on using my first semester of high school to put the finishing touches on my application before i apply early action in January. If I could have somebody read my essay and critique it, that would be great! It's an essay that I wrote for my English III class that I later entered in a city wide writing contest. (It won 1st place.) If you wouldn't mind reading it, just let me know and we can exchange emails. I also don't mind if it's more than one person. I'd love multiple opinions! Thanks!
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<p>Wow, it’s early, but I have some free time. Feel free to PM if you’d like.</p>
<p>I’m free to read some essays. Expect some criticism from me though. </p>
<p>@Hawkace can you read mine?
@tobester I can read yours</p>
<p>@Phongtheha I just read tobester’s essay and gave feedback. I can read your essay if you want. </p>
<p>I’ll read it but expect the harshest, most thorough, most substantiated criticism ever.</p>
<p>I’ll read it but expect no criticism and slightly fawning admiration if it’s really great.</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I can help critique it tobester; feel free to message me to exchange emails :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it </p>
<p>I’ll read if you would like. </p>
<p>Wow! Lots of people willing to give feedback! Thanks so much! Y’all are the best!</p>
<p>I’ll read it & give some feedback, I’m sure it’s good </p>