looking for someone to take a look at my essay

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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So I’m an prospective international student, and I have tried to write a common app essay.
this is the prompt I’ve chosen: Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?

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I will look at it! PM me:) I have already written mine and would love to send it to you if you want

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I’ll be glad to take a look at it!

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bump

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I’d love to take a look at it!

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same bro