Looking for Transfer Common App Essay Readers

<p>Hi guys!</p>

<p>I'm hoping to transfer from a state university to a liberal arts college. I'm hoping that my essay will be the "selling point" of my application. Would anyone care to read it? </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

sure!

Would you read mine if I read yours?

@ksyar2001 you read mine? want to swap?

YES

Anyone else?

@HelloImChelsea‌
I’ll read yours, if you want to read mine, as well.