<p>I have finished my first draft of the common app essay. It's very important to me, and I want to make it great. So of course I came to this forum to get some editing. I am looking for readers who will not show the essay I send them to anyone else or copy it in any way. If you are willing to help me, post here. Not to mention it's a good read.</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>
<p>Well since you said it’s a good read, I’m officially curious! Hahaa just PM it to me.</p>
<p>EDIT: It’s too long, and I desperately need help trimming it down.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind taking a look…I tend to be better at reviewing the work of others than improving my own. I figure I should give back, since I’ll need some help with mine eventually.</p>
<p>PM it to me if you like.</p>