Lots of essays needing critiques!

<p>Hi everyone, I have a bunch of essays that I need edited. I know that most of you probably don't want to read all of them but just tell me which one you're willing to help with and I'd be really grateful. Also, I prefer those who are already in college or beyond to edit them. Or that you're not applying to the school that you're going to edit the essay for. Thanks!</p>

<p>Johns Hopkins:
what's your major and why-Wrote about bio and some research I did for this</p>

<p>Cornell: S
ame as JHU but modified to show things about Cornell that appeals to me</p>

<p>MIT:
Short answers (what you do for fun, and which department at MIT appeals to you the most)-I wrote about american sign language and bio again.
long essay where you describe an "end of the world" experience that wasn't so bad after all-I wrote about an airplane experience I had
optional essay about something you have created-wrote about a paper crane project I started with my friends in remembrance of one of our friends who had passed away in middle school.</p>

<p>Harvard (I need help choosing the essays too)
Choose your own topic supplement/common app-I'm not really sure which two essays to choose so could I could appreciate it if you give feedback.
The major one used for JHU and Cornell, but I'll change it to cater toward Harvard.
-The MIT long essay about the end of the world.
-The MIT creation essay
-An essay I wrote about an experience I had with a vegetable garden (I used this for common app for some other schools)
-An essay about my name.</p>

<p>Il give the jhu/cornell one a go if youd like, which one doesnt matter, and perhaps another that you feel is up for contention for harvard</p>

<p>i will take a look at all of them. add me to windows live messenger- <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a> or email them to me via the above email.</p>

<p>send me any essay that you would like to be critiqued. just PM me. :)</p>