I am not clear if you are telling us that these items are in your essay. The personal statement isn’t supposed to be about your activities. Maybe some of your activities will feature in your essay, but the personal statement for US colleges is much more about showing your personality. The things you do outside of school can be listed in the activities section of the application.
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