<p>I've got my two essays done, but now I need help with what needs revision. The supplemental essay is a lot less smooth than my main essay. Does anyone want to read them and critique? Thanks!!</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>sure i will</p>
<p>i could read it if you want... where are you applying?</p>
<p>I'll read it...</p>
<p>ME TO ill read it</p>
<p>sure, pm me</p>
<p>i will help. Hopefully, these essays suit the college your applying to</p>
<p>i'll read it, pm me.</p>