May SAT essay

<p>can someone comment on my essay really quick:</p>

<p>my examples were:</p>

<p>how you need to listen to parents</p>

<p>learn from an internship coordinator (proffesionals)</p>

<p>little red riding hood- don't stray from the path</p>

<p>what was ur topic? cuz mine was about decison making and emotions,etc</p>

<p>mine was “should you pay attention to older and more experienced people?”</p>