<p>I just finished revising my first ever college essay. I'm not sure if it's what it should be considering I'm pretty new at this, and it might be a risk, but would anyone like to read it and give their opinion?</p>
<p>Send it over.</p>
<p>I just finished revising my first ever college essay. I'm not sure if it's what it should be considering I'm pretty new at this, and it might be a risk, but would anyone like to read it and give their opinion?</p>
<p>Send it over.</p>