<p>Would it help to say something like 'John Smith, a family friend attended ____ for ____ PHD and blablabla allowed me to see the benefits of that major.
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<p>It adds a personal touch/feel plus more reason for choosing a major... but I guess there are obviously downsides. </p>
<p>Does it help or not?</p>