<p>In one of my essays (with a prompt that is open-ended), I find that mentioning my name allows me to develop the essay further, and I wish to include it (I don't want to go in further detail about it because I don't want to reveal the subject of my essay). However, I realized that including my name in the essay would give away my ethnicity, and obviously this plays a role in admissions. I suppose they may already know your ethnicity from other parts of the application, but is adding your name in the essay itself getting too personal?</p>
<p>I'm not exactly sure about etiquette in college admissions. I remember reading about one college that they assigned numbers to every applicant so admissions officers were not biased to select one applicant over another...</p>
<p>So, is it appropriate to include your name, or not?</p>
<p>Whether you decide to include your name or not in your essay, giving away your ethnicity should not be a factor in your decision. They already have your name on file when you submit it (all your records have your name on it), so I don’t see how including your name in the essay will make any difference.</p>
<p>Adding your name could make it more personalized, and thus they could be more likely to connect your name to the essay. At other times though, it could feel irrelevant. If you don’t want to emphasize your ethnicity in your essay, you could always just use your first name or leave it out altogether. But like mentioned above, your name will already be included on other parts of your application. How else would they be able to identify who they are going to be admitting?</p>
<p>So when they read an essay they know exactly whose it is already (e.g. “John Doe” vs applicant #3243) ? If that is the case then I should have no problem adding my name, correct?</p>
<p>I was just worried that the essays could be looked at separately from the rest of the application and given a score, and later, they would be attached back to the main file (as Wesleyan did in the book “The Gatekeepers”). </p>
<p>i don’t put my name in the essay because I don’t have any sentences that would warrant it, but you shouldn’t be afraid of putting your name down. Your name will already be on the college application, transcript, score report, etc. It’s futile to try to hide it, especially if you have a name that’s particularly common (like Kim, Lee, Nguyen, etc.) </p>
<p>Yes they do know whose application it is when they read it. That is how they connect all the supplemental material together with your actual app. (Your submitted SAT score, supplemental submissions, financial aid forms, anything like that) You can see what is actually submitted to them after you complete the full app and click “preview submission.” It contains a 3-4 page document containing the entire application, including your name and your essay. Feel free to include it if your essay warrants it, but don’t feel pressure to put it in either.</p>
<p>The essays will not be read separately from the application. The admissions rep reading your application wants to put together a full picture of you by reading your application form, recommendations, activities and your personal essay. The essay will not be graded by someone else for your writing skills. There is absolutely no problem with putting your name in the essay; the reader already knows your name!</p>