Merry Christmas!!! now can somebody plzzzz critique my essay.

<p>anybody willing to read my common app essay?!
pretty plz!
it's good
i think</p>

<p>Merry x-mas to you too! Wrong forum though lol. Post this is the "College Essays" forum</p>

<p>heh, oops. thanks for the advice!</p>

<p>bump. PLZ somebody, a little help?</p>

<p>i will do yours if you do mine</p>

<p>k deal 10char</p>

<p>plz, one more person willing?
plz plz plz</p>