Middlebury supplement. Read and critic please!

<p>Hey all,</p>

<p>I need to know if my Middlebury supplement essay is well written. Please nudge me if you're willing to read and critic my essay.</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

<p>hey! I'd be happy to proofread your essay and give you my opinion! im also applying to middlebury this year but i am also a part-time journalist for a national newspaper so if you don't mind, i could critique it for you!
PM me and send it over!
See ya</p>

<p>I'll read it if you want.</p>

<p>sure ill do it too</p>

<p>I'm willing to critique.</p>

<p>Alright, PM-ed you guys!</p>

<p>send it over and i can do some proofreading.</p>

<p>I can read it. I'm an 09er but I'm not applying to Middlebury.</p>

<p>OK sent!.. I only have received one reply so far..</p>

<p>PM me... i'd lobe to critique >.<
Best of all</p>