<p>Okay, I know that some people make grammatical and spelling mistakes in their essays and it's all fine...but what about completely screwing up a sentence? I worked pretty hard on my essay and I think that it's strong, but in the first paragraph (3rd sentence) there is a sentence fragment. It's also not really understandable from the context. I wrote:</p>
<p>"My friends always found the unique aspects of Buddhism."</p>
<p>when it's really supposed to be:</p>
<p>"My friends always found the unique aspects of Buddhism fascinating."</p>
<p>Hopefully I'm overreacting. I know essays aren't a deciding factor, but with my low scores, they're a pretty big factor for me. Should I be worried?</p>