<p>DECISION: DEFERRED
(Through QuestBridge College Match and EA)</p>
<p>Objective:
•SAT I (breakdown): Didn’t submit.</p>
<p>•ACT: 32 C- 34 E, 35 M, 29 R, 29 S (retook in December)</p>
<p>•SAT II: 770 Math 2, 760 Physics</p>
<p>•Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.88, W 4.68</p>
<p>•Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 1/639</p>
<p>•AP (place score in parenthesis):
10th grade: Calc AB (4), AP World History (3).
11th grade: Calc BC (4), AB subscore (5), Physics B (4), AP Language and Comp (5), APUSH (4).
12th grade: AP Spanish, AP Government, AP Macroeconomics, AP Literature and Composition</p>
<p>•IB (place score in parenthesis): NA</p>
<p>•Senior Year Course Load: Multivariable Calculus III, University Physics I: Mechanics, AP Spanish, AP Government, AP Macroeconomics, AP Literature and Composition, US History 4 Honors (Internship).</p>
<p>•Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):
2014 QuestBridge National College Match Finalist
2014 QuestBridge College Prep Scholar
Fein Fellow (Only 48 in the country selected)
AP Scholar w/ Distinction
NHD (Physics Project) Regional Champion
NHD (Physics Project) State Finalist- 4th place
Eagle Pride Award
2013 Swim MVP
2014 Swim MVP
National Honor Society
Society of Male Scholars</p>
<p>Subjective:
•Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Swimming 6 years (Varsity 4 years) 2014 Varsity Captain
TSA Club- Auto CAD (Co-Founder, Vice President)
Water Polo (2 years)
Intern for Computer Software Company (12)
Everyone Can Swim Program (teaching persons with disabilities how to swim and be safe around water), soon to be foundation once registered through IRS (Founder, Coordinator and Instructor)
Academy of American Studies (9,10,11,12)
NHS (10,11,12)
Society of Male Scholars (11,12)</p>
<p>•Job/Work Experience: Intern for a computer software company. Also, personal physics tutor for summer school students this summer.</p>
<p>•Volunteer/Community service:
Relay For Life (9,10,11,12)
Feed My Starving Children (10,11,12)
Swimming (Timing, running meets, etc. 6 years). I am very involved in the swimming community and have participated in numerous events such as “Swim from Alcatraz” and “Golden Gate Swim” for the F.A.S.T. Foundation.</p>
<p>•Summer Activities: Organizing and running the Everyone Can Swim Program at SpoFit Center for Persons with Disabilities, 3 hours, 3 days a week for 6 weeks, training and competing for swimming, water polo and triathlons, and this summer I attended the QuestBridge National Admissions Conference at Stanford.</p>
<p>•Essays (rating 1-10, details): I submitted through QuestBridge so my essays were different from the regular MIT app. My essays are pretty compelling. Everyone that has read them so far has really liked them. My common app focuses on my mom’s death and all of my family’s struggles and the others are really quirky, focus on my interests and have a lot of voice. (For a little bit of context, when I was 5 my mother was diagnosed with stage 4 breast cancer and when I was 11 she died. Shortly after that my dad lost his job and my sister went through a drug and alcohol stage and dropped out of HS)</p>
<p>•Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
•Teacher Rec #1: Calc Teacher- 8. Probably pretty good but I haven’t read it so idk.</p>
<p>•Teacher Rec #2: 9-10. AP Lang teacher. She loved me so I am sure it is really good.</p>
<p>•Counselor Rec: 9-10 My counselor is in love with me so I am sure this one is great as well.</p>
<p>•Additional Rec: 9-10 My high school swim coach. This one is probably very good too.</p>
<p>Other
•State (if domestic applicant): Arizona</p>
<p>•Country (if international applicant): USA</p>
<p>•School Type: Public (2500+)</p>
<p>•Ethnicity:Caucasian</p>
<p>•Gender: Male</p>
<p>•Income Bracket: ~$32,000</p>
<p>•Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First generation.</p>
<p>Reflection:
Strengths: Background story, class rank, recs, ECs.
Weaknesses: ACT score, lack of science EC involvement.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Average ACT, not much EC background in science but I am a QB Finalist so I think that might have played a factor.
What would you have done differently?: Nothing really
Where else did you apply? Stanford, Princeton, Caltech, ASU Barrett, Cal Berkeley, Cal Poly SLO, etc.</p>
<p>Didn’t really expect to get in, so a deferral is not surprising. I guess I can only hope to get in RD.</p>