<p>Just finished this, who wants to take a gander?</p>
<p>I've never heard of an "End of the World" essay for MIT before; sounds exciting; I'd be glad to critique it.</p>
<p>thanks again, quicksandslowly!</p>
<p>^haha, no problem. Check your PM for the critique!</p>
<p>you know what, email it to me at <a href="mailto:maxtcherevicious@gmail.com">maxtcherevicious@gmail.com</a>
Im going to read it on my phone during the train ride to NYC</p>
<p>sure pm me i'm actually writing that too</p>
<p>Will do, TcherryPie!</p>
<p>I am willing to critique if you wish.</p>
<p>I'll read it aswell. Pm or email it to me.</p>
<p>EDIT: There, I did it. I hope my advice was good, that's a great essay. Good luck!</p>
<p>I'll do it too!</p>
<p>Aww, az1698, thanks!</p>
<p>8675309...
Listening to that right now.</p>
<p>Would anyone also like to read my short answers?</p>
<p>Me..... judging by your essay, im sure they're gonna be great as well!!!!</p>
<p>Well actually I'm writing essay B but I'd love to take a look and give some comment!</p>
<p>I am not going to apply for MIT... i think i'm not fit it... but i'd like to read your MIT essays. if you want, PM me.</p>
<p>Thanks, guys!</p>
<p>Sounds interesting. I'm '09 but not an MIT'er (male:female ratio too high). Send it over!</p>
<p>me .</p>
<p>I'll critique your "end of the world" essay if you do the same for me (I have a similar topic, but it's for the Common App). I like to paste your essay onto a Word document then add ToolTips directly on the document then add about 1-2 paragraphs about my impressions of your essay ... because I just like to help. I think that trading essays is the most fair way to have other people to read your essay.</p>
<p>that's awesome, ab2013!</p>