MIT essay attempt #2 - About my un-Asian parents... Need readers!

College Essays
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<p>Please? :]</p>

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<p>intersting topic though sounds kind of contrived. Curious lol send me?</p>

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<p>send me!!!!</p>

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<p>I've read your other essays; I'll be happy to read this one as well.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>haha yea im in the same boat...send it to me plz</p>

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<p>I would like to read it.</p>

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<p>interesting topic. PM me if you need another?</p>

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<p>i'll read if you still want someone :)</p>

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<p>i can take a look! :]</p>

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<p>I'd like to help ! Advice only. If you like my comments on other essays, PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it if you want</p>

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<p>1<3PI:</p>

<p>You have definitely proved your strength in the second try. It is coherent, and well narrated. Let it be assured that you will not need more editing, or your voice will not be heard.</p>

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<p>I'll read. pm =)</p>

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<p>Haha I have un-asian parents too.</p>

<p>PM me.</p>

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<p>sounds interesting, PM me please</p>