MIT essay - off topic? Help!

<p>Hey guys</p>

<p>I just finished my MIT essay but I'm not sure if it's a little off topic. The prompt is: Describe the world you come from, for example your family, clubs, school, community, city, or town. How has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations? </p>

<p>I would love your opinions on it!!</p>

<p>i'll read it for ya, send it over.</p>

<p>Sure, I'll throw in my two cents. PM me.</p>

<p>I'll look it over. PM me.</p>

<p>send it over</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it; PM me</p>

<p>i'm read it, pm me</p>

<p>i'll take a look :)</p>

<p>me .</p>

<p>send it to me!</p>

<p>You may PM me your essay if you like my comments on others.</p>