MIT Essay. Readers?

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone be willing to look over my obstacle/End of the World essay to MIT? I wrote about moving to Singapore in middle school.</p>

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<p>Interesting topic: you saw moving in Singapore as the end of the world. It seems you just love America! PM it to me if you wish!</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll do that</p>

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<p>I'm interested, PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me if you would like.</p>

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<p>i would love to. pm me</p>

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<p>Yeah, I had a very similar experience so I'll know where you're coming from too. :) I'd love to help!</p>

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<p>ill check it out send it to me</p>

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<p>　　PM me :)</p>

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<p>i will read it</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want; just PM me and I'll critique it!</p>

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<p>PM me. I'll read it for you as well ^_^</p>

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<p>pm me if u wish</p>

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<p>Sure, I can take a look if you wish. Just PM it to me.</p>

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<p>PM me too!</p>