MIT Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hi,
Can someone please help me out.
I am applying early admission to MIT for engineering and I'm wondering about my essay. I started to write one of those corny blah blah english essays about a "life changing experience." and got fed up with it and wrote a different one.</p>

<p>I'm wondering if its too dramatic or different, because in a way I completely blew-off the prompt. Can someone read it over and help out? </p>

<p>I am also applying at Carnegie-Mellon, Lehigh, Northeastern, Columbia and possibly Princeton. Thanks</p>

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<p>'09 here, done my essays. if you don't mind, I'll read them over. won't guarantee that I'll respond quickly though.</p>

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<p>Pm me......</p>

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<p>i wouldn't mind reading</p>

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<p>me .</p>

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<p>I've read a bunch of MIT essays this week.</p>

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<p>I'd love to read/critique it. Send it over!</p>

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<p>hope i can help</p>

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<p>Would love to read</p>

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<p>I would love to critique your essay
disclaimer: already in college</p>

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<p>haha im going on an MIT reading essay spree
send it over, im not applying and i'll check it out for you</p>

<p>PM it up</p>

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<p>send it over, I'll read</p>

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<p>I'll have a look at it!</p>

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<p>Is it too late? I'll take a look at it too!!</p>

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<p>i could read it too for you :]</p>

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<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="hint:%20i'm%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often">/email</a></p>

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<p>so what do you guys think</p>

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<p>i could read and give you feedback</p>

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<p>Send it over!</p>

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<p>I'll read and give feedback if ud like!!</p>