i am having hard time writing the most meaningful activity and summer essays because I don’t know if they should be straightforward or personal. I don’t want to post them here, but I can send them to you personally by email or private message if you are interested. thanks.
<p>anyone? most meaninful activity is only 150 words, and summer is about 250 words. i just don't know how to write them (well, i just did but i don't know if they are good).</p>
<p>ditto.. i've been having a reallly hard time on those essays. my summer essay isn't fully developed yet, but the most meaningful activity is pretty much done.. still confused whether to go personal/humourous or more scientificish.</p>
<p>Don't go scientificish.</p>
<p>This is a "personal essay", so make it like a letter to a good friend (who writes those anymore?). Definetly don't write it like a Chem. research paper.</p>
<p>Hey is this the type of style they look for on those types of essays?</p>
<p>"On July 7th, 2005, at Fox 6 studios, I found myself shaking hands with marketing representatives from some of Americas largest corporations, including Pepsi, Sony, Yahoo, and Hewlett Packard. I realized later on that day, after presenting to them the significance of teen purchasing power and market influence, that I could have never envisioned myself doing that a year before."</p>
<p>Obviously that's just the opening of the essay, but shouldn't this one be more direct than your personal statment?</p>