IF YOU HAVEN’T SUBMITTED YOUR APPEAL YET THEN TAKE THIS ADVICE. I know you read the appeal letter about the guy whose father had a heart attack and forced him to work for money, its relatively obvious considering the similarities. Now I’m not saying it’s necessarily bad to take inspiration from another source, but please change your wording, like a lot of it.
A lot of people got rescinded, a lot of people read that appeal, and a lot of people are heavily formatting their appeals off of it since that person was miraculously reinstated. If a lot of people mirrored that format then it is going to make yours seem weaker, so if you wanna end up going to Irvine I strongly recommend you to word it to your style of writing, you seem to have relatively fine writing skills anyways.