My app essay draft...

College Essays
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<p>I am applying for 2011 Fall and recently finished my first draft of personal essay. Could anyone help me read it and offer some suggestions?..</p>

<p>thanks </p>

<p>....</p>

<p>please attach your e-mail address..</p>

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<p>I’m interested… Could you just PM me?</p>

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<p>I’ll help you out if you want. PM me!</p>

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<p>PM me 10 char</p>

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<p>PM me
10 char</p>

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<p>totally interested. glad to help in anyway possible. PM for my email. :D</p>

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<p>I’ll help PM me as well.</p>