<p>So I wasn’t planning on applying to Brown this year until I talked to family over winter holiday and they convinced me to apply. I did my essays last minute, and, looking back, I feel like they are sub-par. Would anyone care to read and give me an honest opinion?</p>
<p>Oh, sorry I haven't messaged back from a while ago.. I'm too lazy to PM you, so:
1 - The 'Three' theme wasn't propagated well enough through the essay, I don't think.
2 - Interesting, I liked it.
3 - Not bad.</p>