<p>hi guys I wrote my common app about defeating cancer and finding life
it means a lot to me and i really put my heart into it. anyone interested in giving me some thoughts? </p>
<p>I'm only looking for people who will 1. actually respond 2. give a thoughtful critique and 3. not be a stealer (I mean if you'd steal an essay about cancer that's pretty low) </p>
<p>thanks guys I’ll PM it to you both first thing in the morning!
my computers downstairs haha and it’s about time I hit the hay.
if anyone else is interested just comment :-)</p>
<p>could anyone read my essay ASAP and give me feedback?
if so comment below
also if you want me to read your essay, i will be more than happy to do that too.</p>