My College Essay Needs Editing! info inside

College Essays
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<p>I just changed my essay from humor to emotions.
I'm trying to make the adcoms laugh and cry at the say time.
Please edit/critique!
Thanks guys!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look if you would like me to-- send me an email with your essay attached. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>Sent.
Need more people!</p>

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<p>Make me laugh/cry :]</p>

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<p>sure send it over!!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>Bump!
Thanks guys!</p>

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<p>PM me. Ill review it.</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll give you my email and you can send it</p>

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<p>If you need more input, send it to me.</p>

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<p>heyy i’m 2014er but i’ll read it if you’d like. i’m DONE mine i swearr, and if you don’t believe me you can ask ampersand& - she ediited mine, and i can definately vouch for her, she’s a GREAT editor, pretty cool too :)</p>

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<p>Bump!
Still need more opinions.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM it over.</p>

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<p>Of course the people I message never respond to my PMs.
Bump!</p>