<p>Anyone wanna read it and critique it.</p>
<p>lemme read it!</p>
<p>i'd be willing to do so</p>
<p>Sent thanks a lot</p>
<p>I'll read it as well, if you'd like more feedback.</p>
<p>i</a> can help</p>
<p>Sent to all four thanks for reading</p>
<p>pm it to me plz</p>