<p>yeah,it is to be soon finished,i have to be out of my campus .but i'm so worried about my job.i have no enough confidence to find a satisfied job ,it's so shamed i didn't work hard in school.even now i begin to feel afraid ,no job no money and no happy life ,only sigh.so in the last several months ,i will try my best to improve my english(because i'm from china) and academic ability.
so i come to this forum to practise my written english,even though there must be a lot of mistake, i hope i can make a little progress everyday.
so i'm glad to see your answer to my topic,more appreciate if you can send me a email whatever you talk ,the address is
<a href="mailto:justzx@126.com">justzx@126.com</a></p>
<p>Why do you have to leave school?</p>
<p>Your English is alright enough to understand you just need to learn to add the letter 's' in certain places.</p>
<p>Yeah it isn't all that bad. And it's normal for most people to have difficulty finding a decent job after graduation. Don't be so down about it. Just work a little harder in school, learn what you can in school and from past experiences/jobs, and you'll do fine.</p>
<p>Good luck finding a job! Your English isn't bad at all...</p>
<p>thanks a lot for your encouragement,everybody.i will come here constantly ,to learn from you more,and to see you guys. i appreciate your attention to me. i want to write something about me now,and hope you guys know me better.
i'm a graduate student in a engineering institute in Beijing.and my major is automatization ,mainly to do something on controling motor with microprocessor like MCS-51,AVR etc.
in july next year, i will graduate from this university ,but perhaps one month later, i have to hunt a job, i'm eager to work for MARS China ,a company from US is well-known by its canty and chocolate.so i need to master english ,especially speaking and writing .
Are there someone of you looking for a job ? could you give me some advice about writing a resume ?</p>
<p>Smilechou,
I'm only providing correction at your request...your English is quite good. You must capitalize the first letter of the first word of each sentence. Also, MARS company manufactures candy (rather than canty). I think practice helps. As I mentioned on another thread, my son improved his German reading and writing by corresponding with a native German.</p>
<p>commas always have spaces after them:</p>
<p>As I mentioned before, my son improved his German.</p>
<p>Do you have Microsoft Word? Type on there, and let it edit your mistakes (which, by the way, are few). Almost always will it edit correctly.</p>
<p>Best of luck for the future.</p>
<p>But pay attention to what Word edits, so you learn it.</p>