<p>Hi, I wrote this essay as a topic of my choice. It's about my experiences with a handicapped kid I buddy with. I'm worried it's too much about him, too little about me, and that it might be over the top with cheesiness.</p>
<p>If anyone wants to read, let me know and I'll PM. Give me any advice you have, I don't mind criticism since I really want to improve this essay.</p>
<p>I'd love to kknow this story, PM me, I'll try to help</p>
<p>i actually am having this problem too...so send it over, i'll read.</p>
<p>sure...pm me</p>
<p>pm me for my opinion</p>
<p>pm, i'd love to critique</p>
<p>me me me! i'd love to read it</p>
<p>i'd love to read it too!</p>
<p>sounds interesting.. i'll critique it!</p>
<p>If the cheesyness is cliche...then yes, it may be too cheesy.</p>
<p>PM it over, if you'd like.</p>
<p>PM me and i'll read it.</p>
<p>id like to read pm it over</p>
<p>Sounds alright. Virtually any topic has potential. I'll read.</p>
<p>send it on over</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM it to me.</p>
<p>ill read, pm me please</p>
<p>pm i'll read it and give a response</p>
<p>Thanks everyone, I actually submitted but I appreciate those who gave input.</p>
<p>Consider the thread closed.</p>
<p>ill read it.. pm me</p>
<p>could someone read mine too?</p>