<p>It needs work. I don't know how to end it. I also could word somethings better IMO. Thanks in advance. I will also try to help others with their essays. Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>Please PM me or email me at <a href="mailto:youngreese1@gmail.com">youngreese1@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>i can read em, pm me if you still want my feedback/corrections.</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it</p>
<p>I can too, and I may also need sb to view mine</p>
<p>so.......i sent my essay to one person and they never replied. and my deadline is getting closer and closer.......thanks CC</p>
<p>If you need help on a strict deadline aka next two days, I won't be helpful. But, I THINK I can get around to it tonight. But, I'm not 100% sure. Send it if you think the deadline isn't that impending.</p>