My Common App short answer ESSAY

<p>I would really appreciate if anybody would read my Common App short answer on an extracurricular?</p>

<p>I would love your suggestions and opinions!!!</p>

<p>I'm also having trouble cutting my essay down to 150 words. It's 163 right now, but I feel I'm being as concise as possible with my topic.</p>

<p>i wouldn't worry about 163 words-as long as the online app will take it, and pm i'll read it.</p>