My Common App short answer?!

College Essays
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<p>Would anybody like to read my Common App short answer on an extracurricular?</p>

<p>I want to know your opinion. What do you think? Impressive? Informing? Arrogant? Vague? Any comments would be appreciated!</p>

<p>I'm also having trouble cutting my essay down to 150 words. It's 180 right now, but I feel I'm being as concise as possible with my topic. Advice on that would be great too!</p>

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<p>pm me and i will</p>

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<p>pm me as well why not</p>

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<p>hmm will anyone else please critique me?</p>

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<p>I'll give up some time to critique it. You're welcome to PM me.</p>

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<p>oh thanks a lot!</p>

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<p>PM me if you want one more opinion</p>

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<p>It's getting pretty good! thanks a lot guys</p>

<p>anyone else willing to??</p>

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<p>me! 10 char</p>

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<p>i'll proofread it, pm me</p>

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<p>I'll read it :) pm me.</p>

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<p>yes me too ^^</p>

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<p>If you don't mind the fact that I'm a high school senior, feel free to PM it to me and I'd be happy to give my feedback.</p>

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<p>thanks a lot everyone! I believe my essay is in its final steps...anyone want to read over it?</p>

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<p>pm me i'll look it over</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

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<p>pm me and ill read it.</p>

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<p>pm me too :)</p>

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<p>haha thanks everyone...I'm pretty much set on my essay. I'm going to let it sit for a while and come back to it. But, if anyone wants to read it, I'm still open to suggestions :]</p>