My Commonapp essay-getting close!

<p>So I think my commonapp essay for Syracuse is getting pretty close to being ready for application. All my teachers and family love it, but I still think its a little rough around the edges. Would anyone be willing to give it a quick look?</p>

<p>Yes! And take a look at mine as well</p>

<p>will do-PM it over please</p>

<p>I’ll totally read it. PM me</p>

<p>PM Me. I will get back to you</p>

<p>thanks for the help guys! still looking for a few more opinions…</p>

<p>i’ll help you pm me.</p>

<p>sure
pm over</p>

<p>thanks guys! every little bit helps!</p>

<p>sure pm it over</p>

<p>ill read it and illl do it right now ^^</p>

<p>just finished up another set of edits, anyone wanna take a peek?</p>

<p>sure
PM it over</p>