My CommonApp Essay

<p>I would love if someone could read it and tell me what they think. I wrote it in one day yesterday but I think it is pretty good. Thanks.</p>

<p>sure, send it</p>

<p>I'll read as well.</p>

<p>sure pm me it</p>

<p>i can help out.. right now :)</p>

<p>yeah, just pm it to me</p>