My essay BLOWS!!! I need help.

<p>Ok so for the past week and a half I've been writing my college essay. I've changed my topic so many times, and I've finally found one and got it down on paper but it's like I have writers block. I know that I have plenty of time before applications should be sent in, but my English teacher is taking it for a grade so I want it to be a good read for her as well as admission counselors. If anyone wants to read it I can pm it to them. And PLEASE, be brutal!</p>

<p>Can PM me… I’ll give it a read</p>

<p>You can PM it to me too.</p>

<p>i would like to help you with your essay</p>

<p>I will read/critique them for you. PM them to me.</p>