my essay idea

College Essays
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<p>im a junior in high school and i recently thought of a possible personal essay topic. here goes it: my jewish idendity. i would talk about my bar mitzvah and how it led to me getting a confirmation. i could talk about my jewish youth group (where i hold an officer position), my hebrew "high school" type thing which is like hebrew school, my trip to israel for 4 weeks, and tutoring a kid for hebrew who is on the asberger's spectrum........</p>

<p>how does it sound?</p>

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<p>Sounds like a great idea to me,as long as you make sure you’re not all over the place with it and you have your own personal touch on it.</p>

<p>Good luck!</p>

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<p>Sounds like a good idea.</p>

<p>Remember though, it’s not about what you say; it’s how you say it.</p>