my essay needs help

Applying to College
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<p>Yeah, well I posted in the Harvard forum but got no responses SO...</p>

<p>I would really appreciate it if I could get a few people to critique my essay. It is ~520 words. Particularly, I'd really love it if a current college student (someone who has already been through the app. process, maybe even someone attending the schools I'm applying to) could give me some wisdom.</p>

<p>I'm applying to some tough schools (Harvard, Columbia, Tisch, USC Film... ...).</p>

<p>I will PM the essay if you are interested.</p>

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<p>I'll look at it if you'd like. Send it on over...</p>

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<p>thanks
others...?</p>

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<p>me too plz.. PM me</p>

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<p>I'll give you feedback but I won't edit grammar lol</p>

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<p>PM me also!!!!!!!!!!</p>

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<p>I'm not in college, but I'd love to take a look at it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look too!</p>

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<p>I'm not in college either, but I'm willing to look it over. PM me.</p>

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<p>what's it about?</p>

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<p>I don't mind giving you some feedback, PM me!</p>