my essay sucks major... who wants to read it?

<p>i'm applying to stern RD because i thought it would be funny to be rejected from wharton first (haha, it makes me feel all shiny inside). so... i am doing the common app, and wrote about an experience i had. the only thing is im kanda a majorly horrible writer and i have poor camma usage (i got a 640 on the writing section, which is 100 points lower than my next lowest section). can anyone read my essay? it will really help me out AND it will make you all feel better about your essays...</p>

<p>sure pm it to me</p>

<p>stern hardly cares about one's writing skills, so as long as it's gramatically sound it should be fine.
(I'm taking the Writing the Essay class with some sternies, and we often read each other's works. Needless to say I wasn't impressed with their writing abilities at all...)</p>

<p>i'm applying to stern and am working on my essay too, pm it to me</p>

<p>ill read-----</p>

<p>PM me. i decided not to apply.</p>