My essay...

<p>Can someone please critique my UC essay? I think there is much to be desired.</p>

<p>sure thing. Send it over.</p>

<p>Thanks (10 char)</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

<p>I'll try to take a look. Which one is it/how long?</p>

<p>i'll give it a go. feel free to pm me.</p>

<p>i'll try too</p>