My essay...

<p>Just finished my common app essay... anybody care to critique it?</p>

<p>me me me me me</p>

<p>Send it over Ernie</p>

<p>i'll look over it</p>

<p>I'd like to read it</p>

<p>I will read it.</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>send it over :)</p>

<p>I'll help, Ernie.</p>

<p>sure, send it over</p>

<p>sure, i'll send u mine too when i'm finished</p>

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I would be happy to provide you with some constructive critisism. Send me a PM if you like.</p>

<p>:)</p>

<p>sure, send it my way. :D</p>

<p>I'lll read it</p>

<p>Hey Ernie, I can take a look for you.</p>