<p>I think it is THE essay I've been trying for. Of course it is a first draft, so any corrections or help with transitioning towards the last couple paragraphs would be a HUGE help. It is eccentric and different. NO ONE ELSE has EVER written on this topic. Therefore, I am not afraid of anyone taking.</p>
<p>I WILL PM IT TO YOU.</p>
<p>I’ll read it Pm me</p>
<p>Sure, I’d love to help you out. I’m pretty harsh, so you’re in good hands.</p>
<p>I can read it</p>
<p>thank you guys, thank you so far.</p>
<p>Heya, I’ll take a look at it also!</p>
<p>-anyone else?- I am desperate for feedback. Ive already Pmed about 11 people with no response!</p>
<p>I’ll read it and get back to you ASAP. :)</p>
<p>I’m '14, so if you don’t have a problem with that I’ll be happy to give you feedback!</p>
<p>PM me. I would be worried about some of the above posters ■■■■■■■■ for essays. Check their post histories. Feel free to check mine: I’m legit.</p>
<p>I’m '14 BTW…I’m not applying to Brown or any college of that caliber, and I actually just wrote my essay and am looking for people to read it.</p>
<p>Just thought I’d clear my name.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>
<p>I’d be more than HAPPY to help you 
PM me :D</p>
<p>I’m a '14er, but I’m not applying to Brown (applying to UCB, Stanford, Princeton, Cornell, maybe MIT), so if you have no issues with me reading it then send it over! I’ll provide some feedback.</p>
<p>Will you please PM it to me? Im a 2014er, but im not applying to brown</p>
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<p>I will send this to trustworthy members ONLY.</p>
<p>The essay is too unique to be stolen completely, but I still want to express caution since September-November is PRIME time for applications.</p>
<p>2014’s are allowed. Which is what I am myself. However, if you have under 10 posts and sound hungry for essay ideas, sorry. But I will PM to most people. Most people who have the motivation and character to actually use this site are usually AWESOME communicators, and in my experience are never a let down with help. </p>
<p>And I’d be happy to help anyone with theirs in an exchange!</p>
<p>PM me, i’m quite credible</p>
<p>PM Me. I will get back to you</p>
<p>I’ll look at it if you want. Too much time on my hands anyways; my ED for BU is almost finished just need teacher rec’s.</p>
<p>Lol
careful who u give em too dude</p>
<p>PM me if u want, my brother attends brown, i can send it to him and he can send it back to me.</p>
<p>im doing this already for another poster who wants to attend brown
my brothers reading his right now i think</p>