My first college essay!

<p>Anyone mind reading mine, and giving me some feedback?</p>

<p><a href="mailto:xjessicamoon@gmail.com">xjessicamoon@gmail.com</a>
please email me, I would greatly appreciate it :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read your essay and return comments. PM me the essay and include your email address again if you could and I’ll send it back with feedback as soon as I can :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to too. Just send me a personal message</p>