My first draft college essay

<p>Hey, anybody want to offer suggestions for my college essay? Just respond and I'll PM it to you. Thanks! :)</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>I'll be happy to look over it. Just send me a PM with the essay, the prompt, and the college it's directed towards. :)</p>

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

<p>I can read it too..</p>

<p>Thanks for the feedback, red remote! Any other volunteers? :)</p>

<p>Thanks very much, frutiaspice! Would anyone else like to read it?</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>