<p>Hey guys! I recently got admitted into MIT as an International Transfer. I have gotten MANY PMs requesting more information for inspiring transfers and so I am writing this thread in the hopes of helping a brotha out. </p>
<p>I was asked what my profile looked like. I will address that later because first, I want to give a few bits of advice:</p>
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<li><p>Forget CC and be who you are.
Sounds super ambiguous I know. But really: please go ahead and delve into your current university, explore all your options, do what you enjoy, thrive in it, be happy, enjoy life. Only then can you be mature enough to understand that MIT- as AMAZING as it is- its just a school, and that if you get rejected- life keeps on going. This way, you wont be terrified to send in your application. My application was waaay different simply because I wasnt afraid to be who I am. Also, if you spend your time being happy doing what you love, your essays will have a lot more substance than if you just spend your time looking at accepted profiles in CC. </p></li>
<li><p>Please forget CC and be who you are.
Should you apply? Yes. How are your chances? Very small. Your GPA/scores/ECs are terrible. Oh well. Dont listen. Only you know yourself and your situation. Apply. </p></li>
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<p>Now please dont take me wrong: CC, in general, has been TREMENDOUS help to me. But thats only the information part. The other- the speculation- does more harm than good. Some people in CC are very nice and encouraging. Some people arent. Dont take it to heart. But yeah- you should be outside now doing something amazing. So when you finish reading this, please go outside and do something amazing. </p>
<p>On to my profile:</p>
<p> International Transfer Applicant
Female (doesnt matter cause I am International)
Hispanic (doesnt matter cause Im international)
Living in: South Florida
GPA: 3.76
Major: Mathematics
SAT: 2270 (R 700 / M 770/ W 800)
SAT IIs: Math 2 720 / Chem 640 (EPIC FAIL)</p>
<p>There I am in numbers. See how cold it sounds? You get nothing of who I am. Nothing. </p>
<p>Which is why your essays should REALLY reflect who you are. </p>
<p>Here are the ECs:</p>
<p>ECs (in order for importance like they asked)</p>
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<li> Time for myself. Usually read poetry or just lay down and think about stuff. </li>
<li> Time with my family. </li>
<li> Stargaze. HUGE for me.</li>
<li> Math. I keep a math journal in which I explore all these notions. Also huge.</li>
<li> Spinal Cord Injury Research. When I was 17, I started my own independent study on ALS. Ended up with this theory. Then I joined a research team working on spinal cord injury and regeneration in zebrafish; was one of a total of 4 undergrads. In charge of several projects within the team: the breeding, the surgeries, and the design and keeping of the website. </li>
<li> Study groups for math and physics. </li>
<li> Math & Astronomy Club. Co-funded and led as Vice President.</li>
<li> Haiti Earthquake Relief. Started this very successful food/cloth/medical supplies drive. </li>
<li> Haiti Solar Energy. Design and build solar-powered devices to send to rural areas around the world. Currently working with Haiti. We are transforming this whole monastery/church/school to solar-power providing them with electricity for the first time. (my current university is catholic)</li>
<li>Build make stuff. I build rockets. And solar-powered cars. And robots. And I paint. On canvases. And walls. </li>
<li>Workout group. Started workout group in university. 2 hours a day, 5 days a week, buddy system. </li>
<li>Reading.<br></li>
<li>Bake. I bake at least once a week. Then I give it to my fam or take it to friends.</li>
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<p>My Recommendations:</p>
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<li> 3 required</li>
<li> Sent 4 instead</li>
<li> Saw only 2.</li>
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<p>Recommendation I saw #1: From high school junior year chemistry teacher. She adores me and were really good friends. Also, shes currently working in my current university and so shes seen me bloom through the ages. Glowing. </p>
<p>Recommendation I saw #2: From my freshman chemistry professor. AMAZING. Like out-of-this-world. My chemistry professor, who is an absolute genius but who also went insane a long time ago compared me to 3 Nobel Laureates: Woodward, Pople, and Hoffman. Why? Because hes clearly insane.</p>
<p>Essays: </p>
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<li> MIT asked for 2, I sent 4. </li>
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<p>Heres a description of each:</p>
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<li> Why MIT? Essay. </li>
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<p>I made a cartoon flip-book instead of an essay. I POURED my heart and told (and showed!) why I love MIT so much and why I wanted, so badly to be there. My last lines were this:</p>
<p><<< I really do hope you fall for me just like I fell for you. I really do hope you do, cause I, MIT, am in love with you.>>></p>
<p>And then next to it, I drew a heart with the words: Me + MIT in it. </p>
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<li> Most Interesting Experience Essay</li>
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<p>This was an actual essay. About how I grew up loving science and how I began my freshman year of high school as a prospective drop-out due to my anger at my immigration situation which wouldnt let me go to college. Then how I changed because I couldnt escape from my passion for learning and graduated with top honors and how when my worst fears were realized- I couldnt go to college- I would go to a bookstore everyday and read there for free, thereby teaching myself a lot of physics. And then I came home at night and went to youtube to watch MITs OCW on chemistry and biology and how I taught myself that as well. And then I bought all these math books and taught myself all this math. And then by the end of the summer, a local private university heard me, helped me out by breaking a thousand schools rules and letting me register without paying, and then how thanks to everything I taught myself I became the first freshman in my schools history to take junior-level mathematics and chemistry her first year. The main theme- if it wasnt clear by now as I am a terrible writer- was that living through my worst fears had came me stronger. My last lines: I know now that nothing will ever stop me, because life is tough, but I am tougher. "</p>
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<li><p>Extra Essay. On changing the world. It was about how my high school experience as class president for 2 years had imprinted in me a desire to help our planet. How after I graduated I went on to start this fundraiser for Haiti and how then I became involved in an engineering effort to use solar-power to provide electricity to remote places in the world. </p></li>
<li><p>Extra Essay on my love for mathematics. Heres an excerpt:</p></li>
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<p><<< The universe has many laws but those are usually invisible to the human eye and mathematics is the only way in which we can perceive the existence of these laws. Thus, mathematics is beautiful- it is uncorrupted, distilled truth, beautiful in its own perfection it is elegantly perfect: it is philosophy with absolute truth.>>></p>
<p>There. I think thats my whole application. As you guys probably already noticed, Im not such a good writer. I apologize if this post is huge. I promise its not egotistical: I did get a lot of PMs about my profile and, remembering how I was a year ago, trying to get as much information from accepted transfers as possible (I got none), well, here I am. </p>
<p>A few things to remember:</p>
<p>MIT is an awesome place. It is so awesome, that sometimes, they dont care about petty things. Petty things include 50+/- points in the SAT, or 0.1 or 0.2 points of your GPA. </p>
<p>Also you are the only one who knows your true profile, so dont let anyone discourage you. Yes, I had a 3.76 GPA, but in the following courseload my first semester:</p>
<p>(17 credits)</p>
<p>Calc 3 (A-)
Calc Physics (B+)
Lab (A)
Chem (A)
Lab (A)
Bio (A)
Lab (A)</p>
<p>Also, in the classes that I did NOT get an A in (Calc 3 and Calc Physics) I was the highest grade. Consistently. The whole semester. They were just tough classes. Also, my Spring semester looked like this:</p>
<p>(20 credits)</p>
<p>Complex Variables
Numerical Analysis
Undergraduate Research (on Spinal Cord Injury)
Physical Chemistry
Calc Physics 2
Lab
Chem 2
Lab</p>
<p>Only my school has a flat-rate up to your 17 credit and then you have to pay, and since its private, I couldnt afford to pay more so my physical chemistry class I just sat on. It was the same professor of my general chem class and I was the first student in his 17 years of teaching at the University that took p. chem as a freshman and he made sure to include that in his recommendation. </p>
<p>And thats me. </p>
<p>Again, sorry for the Rapunzel-locks length of this. </p>
<p>Here are the final words (I promise Ill be done soon):</p>
<p>See my profile? For my Why MIT? Essay I sent in a cartoon flipbook. For my summer activities, I told them about how I loved to paint- both on canvases and walls- and how I painted my room to look like an ice cream parlor. I told them how I loved to bake brownies for my friends and about how much I love my cat. I was myself. I tried to make the application reflect me as much as possible. Was it unconventional? Sure. I cant think of many other colleges that would have accepted such (in hoity-toity voice) lack of professionalism and seriousness. I was rejected from Dartmouth and Amherst. I think I belonged at MIT and thats why they took me in and now my dreams come true. </p>
<p>So dont be afraid to be yourself. An A and an A- are not very different if the class is tough. Dont sweat it. Go out and be happy. Do what you love. Build so much passion that when the admission officers see your profile on the table, they have to wipe away the tears of laughter or emotion. </p>
<p>Good luck! =)</p>