My June SAT Essay

<p>So I scored a 9 on it. </p>

<p>What aspects of my writing need improvement for a 12?</p>

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<p>Hey, we can’t see your essay because that link is not specific to your essay. It links me to my own essay!</p>

<p>You’ll have to type it up or upload the pictures.</p>

<p>Alright I fixed the links</p>

<p>If you want to read it, I’ll post mine up, I got a 12. Just give me a few minutes to finish my summer school homework.</p>

<p>Yes please post yours :O</p>

<p>where did you guys find your essay? I can’t seem to find mine online.</p>

<p><a href=“My SAT Home Page”>My SAT Home Page;
“View My Score Report and Essay”
Click on writing and at the top there’s a link saying YOUR ESSAY</p>

<p>Everytime I click on a link on my score report it take me to the “security check” screen. Once I type in my username and password it takes me back to the “My Sat” page. Does anyone else ahve this problem?</p>

<p>Go into your score report, click “Writing” and it has a view your essay link at the top.</p>

<p>Here’s my essay:
<a href=“http://www.totalpixelation.com/av-blog/SAT%20Essay%20Page%201.jpg[/url]”>http://www.totalpixelation.com/av-blog/SAT%20Essay%20Page%201.jpg&lt;/a&gt;
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<p>got a 12 woot woot</p>

<p>lol Shadow I like your backwards slanted writing</p>

<p>Really nice essay Shadow. Thanks for posting it as I was considering adopting a similar format as your essay for the upcoming Oct. SAT essay and your 12 has inspired me to continue with doing so.</p>

<p>LOL yeah, my handwriting is really bad. It ALWAYS slants backwards, and if i try to slant it forward it just looks even more messed up.</p>

<p>Yeah, this structure worked pretty well for me. My English teacher helped me out a lot with it.</p>

<p>yay a 12 for me</p>