My law school diversity and personal statement - readers?

College Essays
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<p>So I'm a college student right now, looking to apply to law schools in the T-14 range. I'm somewhat of a splitter (good test scores and mediocre grades). Would anyone be interested in reading my personal statement and diversity statement? Law school personal statements are typically a bit shorter compared to undergraduate essays and law school adcoms also tend to be less receptive to creative and gimmicky essays but otherwise I feel that the criteria for a good essay should be the same. They're not too long, probably under 1000 words total between the two of them.</p>

<p>I've had a friend read them and tell me that they sounded disingenuous to him. Can someone help me out and give me a second opinion?</p>

<p>And of course, I'd be willing to reciprocate if you have an essay that needs reading. PM me or post a comment and I'll message you a link to the essays.</p>

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<p>I’m a new member, and a lawyer mom… I would be happy to take a look this weekend, but note that my reviews are strictly that of an amateur (no adcom experience whatsoever). I think you should be able to pm me- I’ve received one from someone else before.</p>

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<p>Thank you so much. The PM is on its way. And my offer to read your/your sons and daughters essays still stands.</p>

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<p>Hi, I just sent you an email with my comments. If you don’t get it, PM me with your email address, and I’ll resend.</p>